Please help- Would you interview me for job..10 points for honest answer. Thank you?

Tell them what you want to say, say it and leave them wanting more, its too long really. Don't fully understand it but to be honest I wouldn't interview you on the strength of whats above, consider revising. Unless you are capable of saying what you want to say in as few words as possible you may fall flat here. All my best wishes anyhow.